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Le cadavre exquis boira le vin nouveau.

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1/22/08 [Jan. 21st, 2008|12:12 pm]
Le cadavre exquis boira le vin nouveau.
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Let's sing
of the slums.

Let's burn cities
with our cigarettes.

Embers in eyes,
like the last

time you cried
on methamphetamines, or

singing with hypothermic
ice-encrusted lungs.

The bearer amazes
with light in

our lungs, sucking
all the sweetness

the first bites
of the last

ten thousand days
of your life.

by erinnonentity, godchildren, bikerioting, & iamquinnm


Let's sing

of the slums.
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From: godchildren
2008-01-21 05:27 pm (UTC)

Let's burn cities

with our cigarettes.
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[User Picture]From: bikerioting
2008-01-21 07:03 pm (UTC)

Embers in eyes,

like the last
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From: godchildren
2008-01-21 11:15 pm (UTC)

time you cried

on methamphetamines, or
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[User Picture]From: bikerioting
2008-01-22 12:24 am (UTC)

singing with hypothermic

ice-encrusted lungs.
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[User Picture]From: iamquinnm
2008-01-22 04:45 am (UTC)

The bearer amazes

with light in

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From: godchildren
2008-01-22 03:28 pm (UTC)

our lungs, sucking

all the sweetness
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[User Picture]From: bikerioting
2008-01-22 07:25 pm (UTC)

the first bites

of the last
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From: godchildren
2008-01-23 02:19 am (UTC)

ten thousand days

of your life.
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From: godchildren
2008-01-23 02:20 am (UTC)
x
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[User Picture]From: erinnonentity
2008-01-23 11:16 pm (UTC)
wow this is great as is.


another opening, 5 word version again:

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Digesting stars is angel's work.
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From: godchildren
2008-01-24 05:16 am (UTC)
What a gorgeous opening!
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